Lovely jee
Great effort
sharma sharma khud se khudii
ho gayi hun
surkh gulab ki manid
bata mein kya karu.?
k har dharkan mein bajta hai NAAM TERA..
شرما شرما خود سے خودی
ہو گی ہوں
سرخ گلاب کی ماند
بتا میں کیا کروں
کے ہر دھڑکن میں
بجتا ہے نام تیرا
SaniYA
Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....
to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!
Lovely jee
Great effort
bhht zbbrdsst snno siso
I am fine , it only hurts when i breathe
khud se khudii ka matlab kiya hai ?
khud se khudi matlab khud se hiiii
thank u asshii n ruba
Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....
to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!
mujhe bhi 1st line gerber lagi.. may b i m not getting ur real thought. anyways.. overall nice hay.. short and sweet.. keep it up
achi hay
Yahi Dastoor-E-ulfat Hai,Nammi Ankhon,
Mein Le Kar Bhi,
Sabhi Se Kehna Parta Hai,K Mera Haal,
Behter Hai...!!
not bad.....mery b mind main pehla sawal yehi aya k khud say khudi ka kia mtlab hay....?
nice...
Hum kya hain
Hmari Muhabatayn kya hain
kya chahtay hain
kya patay hain..
-Umera Ahmad (Peer-e-Kamil)