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but section is wrong
niiyat-e-shauq bhar na jaaye kahii.n
tuu bhii dil se utar na jaaye kahii.n
aaj dekhaa hai tujhe der ke baad
aaj kaa din guzar na jaaye kahii.n
na milaa kar udaas logo.n se
husn teraa bikhar na jaaye kahii.n
aarazuu hai ke tuu yahaa.N aaye
aur phir umr bhar na jaaye kahii.n
jii jalaataa huu.N aur ye sochataa huu.N
raayegaa.N ye hunar na jaaye kahii.n
aao kuchh der ro hii le.n 'Nasir'
phir ye dariyaa utar na jaaye kahii.n
nice
but section is wrong
Nice
badddd
us section mein ..aur bhi kafi poetry threads they
so i just posted
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salaam Siraj saaHib
aapkii pesh kardah Ghazal pasand aayii. shukria share karne ke liye. mundaja zel ash'aar nisbatan ziyaada pasand aaye:
niiyat-e-shauq bhar na jaaye kahii.n
tuu bhii dil se utar na jaaye kahii.n
aarazuu hai ke tuu yahaa.N aaye
aur phir umr bhar na jaaye kahii.n
aao kuchh der ro hii le.n 'Nasir'
phir ye dariyaa utar na jaaye kahii.n
one quartet of [1 of 4 wings]
The FIRST & ONLY School that i ever attended
Syedna Saifuddin Taahir High School
Aligarh Muslim University
ALIGARH, India
adaab .....all
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