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  1. 14-12-2010, 09:56 PM #1
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    cute Aaj 15th ka Sher. Na garaz na waasta kisi se.

    Na garez kisi se na waasta,
    mujhe kaam apne he kaam se,
    Tere jiqra se teri fiqra se teri
    yaad se tere naam se.
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    Default Re: Aaj 15th ka Sher. Na garaz na waasta kisi se.

    very nice. one thing is that we do not use a at the end of words like fiqar and zikar...
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    cute Re: Aaj 15th ka Sher. Na garaz na waasta kisi se.

    Quote Originally Posted by zuhair View Post
    very nice. one thing is that we do not use a at the end of words like fiqar and zikar...
    Shukriya Zuhair, aapne is sher ko
    tavazo di aur apne rai zaahir ki.
    Derasal mujhe is ki jaankari nahin
    ki aakhir ke alfaaz main zikra fikra
    nahin lete. Aap to Urdu ke student
    hone ke naate jankari hogi. Per Ye
    Sher Jiger Muradabadi ka hai, wo
    to bahut mash- hoor shayer reh chuke
    hai 18-19 century ke. Acha khudahafiz.
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    Default Re: Aaj 15th ka Sher. Na garaz na waasta kisi se.

    very nice


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!
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