Aik sawal aik confusion

[DexteR]

ustaani kon hai yahan?

[~*Rano*~]

rabi bongi ustani hai

[Paras]

Janab, baat dara'sal yeh hai k poetry, nasar yeh Adab k 2 hissay hain , yaani kisi bhi Adab ko 2 hisson main taqseem kya jata hai aik Nasar huta hai aur aik Nazm......ab huta yeh hai k insaan apne izhaar ka zariya in dono main se kissi aik ko bana laita hai , aap ne Umera Ahmed ki aur Faiz ki misaal di , yeh waqai poet hain ya writer, leken agar is k ilawa aur logo ko daikha jaye tu unhune nasar aur nazm dono par kamaal hasil kya hai , maslan Galib, Haali , wagaira..... lekn yeh bhi sach hai k maqboliyat aik mein hi hasil hoi nasar main ya nazm main.............

ab baat aati hai Sd ya aur forums k mmbrs ki , jo nasar aur nazm dono hi achay andaz main likh laitay hain , tu is ki waja yeh hai k janab, hum likh tu laitay hain leken hum yeh nhi jantay k is main kitni galtiyan hain , poetry k leye Fan-e-Urooz ki taleem hasil karna zaroori hai , aur nasar main bhi techniques hoti hain jin se hum na-waqif hote hain , agar hum woh jaan lain tu hamay apni takhleeq par hansi anay lagay k hum ne kitni galtiyan ki hain ,
hamare likhne main kahin khayalat achay hote hai , kahin lafzo ka chunao tu kahin jazbaat, tu kahin waqai kissi kissi ko Allah ne likhne ki salahiyat se nawaza huta hai , leken phir bhi polish ki zaroorat hai....... is leye be-khbri main hum nazm ya nasar ba-asaani likh laite hain..........!

umeed hai confusion door hu gai hugi

[Saffroni]

Janab, baat dara'sal yeh hai k poetry, nasar yeh Adab k 2 hissay hain , yaani kisi bhi Adab ko 2 hisson main taqseem kya jata hai aik Nasar huta hai aur aik Nazm......ab huta yeh hai k insaan apne izhaar ka zariya in dono main se kissi aik ko bana laita hai , aap ne Umera Ahmed ki aur Faiz ki misaal di , yeh waqai poet hain ya writer, leken agar is k ilawa aur logo ko daikha jaye tu unhune nasar aur nazm dono par kamaal hasil kya hai , maslan Galib, Haali , wagaira..... lekn yeh bhi sach hai k maqboliyat aik mein hi hasil hoi nasar main ya nazm main.............

ab baat aati hai Sd ya aur forums k mmbrs ki , jo nasar aur nazm dono hi achay andaz main likh laitay hain , tu is ki waja yeh hai k janab, hum likh tu laitay hain leken hum yeh nhi jantay k is main kitni galtiyan hain , poetry k leye Fan-e-Urooz ki taleem hasil karna zaroori hai , aur nasar main bhi techniques hoti hain jin se hum na-waqif hote hain , agar hum woh jaan lain tu hamay apni takhleeq par hansi anay lagay k hum ne kitni galtiyan ki hain ,
hamare likhne main kahin khayalat achay hote hai , kahin lafzo ka chunao tu kahin jazbaat, tu kahin waqai kissi kissi ko Allah ne likhne ki salahiyat se nawaza huta hai , leken phir bhi polish ki zaroorat hai....... is leye be-khbri main hum nazm ya nasar ba-asaani likh laite hain..........!

umeed hai confusion door hu gai hugi

bahout khoob ...
laken kabhi degree milney k baad bhi woh nikhaar shikhaar paidah nahi hota na ..

[Paras]

bilkul , har fan ko seekhne main tym lagta hai , agar waqai aap k andar woh tamaam khobiyan mujood hain phir taleem bhi us ki hasil kar li hai tu koshishon se aap bhi Aala paye k shaair ya mussanif hu sakte hain !

[Igni]

Walaikum Assalaam Sheemo

Meray khayal sey yeh .. yeh jin lougoun k naam liye u ney .. (ma'azrat k saath ) shayad yeh aik established poet or writer banney k processs main hain ... ... Aur jin renowned poet aur writers k naam u ney liye woh bhi shayad inhein ki tarhan kartey hoon gay pehlay per kisi aik field main zyaada appreciation milnay per unhoun ney ussi ko continue kiyaa ho .... aur ussi main naam kamaaya ...

Waisey main tou na poet hoon na writer per i think .. agar aik bandey main aik sey zyaada talent ho tou us main koi maslaa nahi

Aik kaam awaam k liye .. ... aik apni zaat k liyee

[Saffroni]

aap k itnay saray awards dekh ker to main aapki baat ko kisi had tuk achay tareeqay se maan gaie hoon

[sheem]

pata nai kaisi ustani hai yeh yaaaar

kasam se yeh parhati kiya hia

i think wo ecnomics parhati hai

[sheem]

aap k itnay saray awards dekh ker to main aapki baat ko kisi had tuk achay tareeqay se maan gaie hoon

kis k awards?

[Saffroni]

Walaikum Assalaam Sheemo

Meray khayal sey yeh .. yeh jin lougoun k naam liye u ney .. (ma'azrat k saath ) shayad yeh aik established poet or writer banney k processs main hain ... ... Aur jin renowned poet aur writers k naam u ney liye woh bhi shayad inhein ki tarhan kartey hoon gay pehlay per kisi aik field main zyaada appreciation milnay per unhoun ney ussi ko continue kiyaa ho .... aur ussi main naam kamaaya ...

Waisey main tou na poet hoon na writer per i think .. agar aik bandey main aik sey zyaada talent ho tou us main koi maslaa nahi

Aik kaam awaam k liye .. ... aik apni zaat k liyee

hmmm durusht fermaati hain aap ..agni pariksha aisey hi to nahi hoti na :X