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  1. 21-12-2010, 06:43 AM #1
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    Default tO bE AlOnE. . .

    My insides all turn to ash, So slow
    And blew away as I collapse, So cold
    A black wind took them away, From sight
    And held the darkness over day, that night

    And the clouds above move closer
    looking so dissatisfied
    but the heartless wind kept blowing, blowing

    I used to be my own protection, But not now
    Cause my path has lost direction, Somehow
    A black wind took you away, From sight
    And held the darkness over day, That night

    And the clouds above more closer
    looking so dissatisfied
    and the ground below grew colder
    as they put you down inside
    but the heartless wind kept blowing, blowing

    So now you're gone
    And I was wrong
    I never knew what it was like
    To be alone
    198343 196670793697111 5932486 n - tO bE AlOnE. . .


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  2. 21-12-2010, 05:09 PM #2
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    Default Re: tO bE AlOnE. . .

    The heartless wind blowing blowing
    taken you away from my sight.

    Beautiful and meaningful poetry
    presented. Thanks.
    Last edited by R. M. Dixit; 21-12-2010 at 05:10 PM.
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  3. 21-12-2010, 10:17 PM #3
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    Default Re: tO bE AlOnE. . .

    beautiful sharing............

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    Default Re: tO bE AlOnE. . .

    Very nice
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    Default Re: tO bE AlOnE. . .

    nice sharinG

    thnx 4 sharinG
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    Default Re: tO bE AlOnE. . .

    thank u
    198343 196670793697111 5932486 n - tO bE AlOnE. . .


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    Default Re: tO bE AlOnE. . .

    hm
    198343 196670793697111 5932486 n - tO bE AlOnE. . .


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