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  1. 01-02-2011, 10:16 PM #1
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    Default mErE papa jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY. . .

    wO hai khushi ka Aalam ?
    Ya hai dukh ki wajah ?
    mujhE dEkh kar wOh muskuraYen gaY
    kabhi mujhkO dEkh k wOh hans parEin gaY
    mEre PAPA jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY
    wOh yE sOch kar aaj khush hO rahE thaY
    mEin dulhan banOon gi to aisi lagoOn gi
    mEin dulhan banOon gi to waisi lagoOn gi
    aur YE suntaY suntaY jO aankhEin dikhi mujhkO
    chashmaY k pEEchaY wOh janaY kYOn nam thEEn
    mEin jab bEth-ti hOon to YE sOchti hOon
    mEre Papa jab mujhkO rukhsat karEin gaY
    mErE maathaY pEr ek bOsa to dEin gaY
    mErE gaalOn kO zOr sE kheench dEin gaY
    Aur apni AnkhOn mEin chashmaY k pEEchaY
    wOh AnsoO chupaanaY ki kOshish karEin gaY
    : )
    198343 196670793697111 5932486 n - mErE papa jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY. . .


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    Default Re: mErE papa jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY. . .

    hmm
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    Default Re: mErE papa jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY. . .

    very nyc...
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    Default Re: mErE papa jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY. . .

    thank u : )
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    Default Re: mErE papa jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY. . .

    appreciated.. well written
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    Default Re: mErE papa jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY. . .

    thank u
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    Default Re: mErE papa jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY. . .

    v nice
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    Default Re: mErE papa jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY. . .

    hmm
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    Default Re: mErE papa jab mujhkO rukhsat kariEn gaY. . .

    khoobsoorat jazba , khoobsoorat khayaal
    Bahout acha likha hai ..Her baap apni beti k bicherney k ehsaas ko muskurahat main badalnay k koshish kerta hai ..per kaheen na kaheen zabt ka bandhan toot jata hai .. aur nami , behta pani ban jata hai
    May Allah bless u and ur father
    Sach Hai, Baja Hai ,Mujhsey Shikayat Janab Ki
    Seh Seh K Mainey Zulm,Hai Adat Kharab Ki
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