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  1. 12-02-2011, 01:01 AM #1
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    alfaaz thore ham qaafia nai ho rahe.. concept acha hay ,
    effort appreciated, keep it up
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    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post
    alfaaz thore ham qaafia nai ho rahe.. concept acha hay ,
    effort appreciated, keep it up
    thank you............
    hum qafia kese hon gay main koi asli wali poet thora he hun
    i hope so kisi din yeh b achay ho jayen gay
    thanx for reading
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    khayal bhot acha hia
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    thanx for reading Naz apiya
    hmmm yup wo note ker liya main nay abhi hala k bht kaant chaant k baad yeh share kiya tha

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    agree wid killer
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    ho jaenge.. keep writing.. urdu vocabulary barjao.. dosre poets ko parho.. inshallah aur acha karogi
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    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post
    ho jaenge.. keep writing.. urdu vocabulary barjao.. dosre poets ko parho.. inshallah aur acha karogi
    hmmm reading tou rehti hy but vocabulary ki mere pas hmesha say kami he rehi hy
    really thanx .......

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    Default Re: Toot jatay hain

    nice
    achi nazm hay dhanak
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    accha likha hai
    keep it up


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    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!
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