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  1. 23-02-2011, 08:21 AM #1
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    candel ::Uljhan::


    any comments are most welcome
    i get v confused while writing and mein kuch start kerti hoon tou likhtay likhtay woh totally change ho jata hai.
    aur mein 5-10 minutes se ziada nahi likh sakti, ise liye aisa he likha jata hai

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  2. 23-02-2011, 02:45 PM #2
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    hum shayd ishq ki manzil se dor hian
    inaa mushkil likhti u
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    Quote Originally Posted by naz View Post
    hum shayd ishq ki manzil se dor hian
    inaa mushkil likhti u
    man aur tan ko asani ka nasha nahi dena chaiye
    sakhti mein bari masti hai
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hijaab View Post

    any comments are most welcome
    i get v confused while writing and mein kuch start kerti hoon tou likhtay likhtay woh totally change ho jata hai.
    aur mein 5-10 minutes se ziada nahi likh sakti, ise liye aisa he likha jata hai
    w.salam
    akser aisa hota hay ke ham likhne kuch bethte hain aur lashauri tour per jo likhna hota hay wo zehan se nikal kar kuch aur hi likha jata hay, kabih kabi boht khobsurat ho jata hay aur kabhi aisa k yakeen hi nai hota k ham ne likha hay
    aur agar tum 5-10 mins mai aisa likhti ho, to.. bohat zabardast likhti ho ... sach mei boht acha likha hai...

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    man aur tan ko asani ka nasha nahi dena chaiye
    sakhti mein bari masti hai
    for liking aapi
    ye tum ne bohat gehri aur sach baat kehdi... jo karb se musalsal guzerte hain wo dard me bhi lazzat dhund hi lete hain.. wo kehte haina.. mushkilein inti parin k aasan hogain...

    very well said..
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  5. 25-02-2011, 09:06 AM #5
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    Quote Originally Posted by Killer View Post


    w.salam
    akser aisa hota hay ke ham likhne kuch bethte hain aur lashauri tour per jo likhna hota hay wo zehan se nikal kar kuch aur hi likha jata hay, kabih kabi boht khobsurat ho jata hay aur kabhi aisa k yakeen hi nai hota k ham ne likha hay
    aur agar tum 5-10 mins mai aisa likhti ho, to.. bohat zabardast likhti ho ... sach mei boht acha likha hai...



    ye tum ne bohat gehri aur sach baat kehdi... jo karb se musalsal guzerte hain wo dard me bhi lazzat dhund hi lete hain.. wo kehte haina.. mushkilein inti parin k aasan hogain...

    very well said..

    uf yeh nafs...
    dua ki guzarish hai ke bus yeh dua kijeay ga ke tareef per aur appreciation per kbhi nafs khush na ho...ameen, suma ameen
    bht takleef hoti hai...
    bht shukriya aap ke comments ka
    dard ki talb tou hai per hesiyat nahi hai!
    shukriya once again
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  6. 23-02-2011, 10:07 PM #6
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    touba hai hijaaaaaaaaaab
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  7. 24-02-2011, 02:18 AM #7
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    yeh ghusa hai ya payar
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    very nice
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    Accha likha haiiii hijab sis:Rosee:


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!
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    Sani
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