Writer Club Competition March 2011

[naz]

Yeh Tasveer Hai
Is PER APNE alfazon main choti si Tehrer likhye
bhottttt zaida lamba mat kijeye ga tehrer ko..




Rules :


1 ... Aik member aik he bar Share Karsakta hai.
2 ... Aik jaisa mat share kijeye ga.
3 ... Comp ki last Date 21 March hai.

[dhanak]

kesi yeh anjaan lerki hy ?
mushkilo say lertay khud apna raasta bnatay safar-e-hayaat main tanha mehv-safar hy.................
janay kya sochti rehti hy wo siyaah labaas pehnay janay kya khoojti rehti hy.....................
main jo roz pehron khara osay jata daikta rehta hun janay kis khyaal main bin daikhay wo chalti rehti hy..................
jo jugno os nay thamaye thay jo saal kuch intezar k mjhy amanat sonpay thay ..............
shyad waday ko bhula diya os nay ...............
tanha safar ko manzil bna liya os nay..............







pehlay tou mjhy kuch samjh nahi ii pic ki
sach yeh hy bin mood k likh nahi paati or likha loon tou anzer e sani nahi kerti so abi yahee type kr k share ker diya

[devilg]

Sadiyon ki musfat hai
Sadiyon ka intizar

aik bar palat kar to dekh Zalim
humain aaj b hai tum se pyar

[ZPR]

یہ میری اپنی لکھی ہوئی ہے امید ہے آپ کو پسند آئے گی۔۔


محبت کم نہیں ہو گی
سنو اے چارہ گر میرےٍ
میرا وعدہ ہے یہ تم سے
تمھارے رُوٹھ جانے سے
کسی کو اپنا بنانے سے
بات بے بات لڑنے سے
اُلجھنے سے جھگڑنے سے
میرا یہ دل تو تڑپے گا
مگر آنکھ یہ نم نہیں ہو گی
تمھارے دور جانے سے
محبت کم نہیں ہو گی

[naz]

yeh poetry sec nahi hai yaha nasr likha jata hai..

[~*Rano*~]

i ll try

but pic

[insh]

Pta nahi main jo karnay ja rahe ho woh sahee hai ya galat..main ne yeh faisla intehai takleef main kia hai ......
kabhi Ayaan se milna mare zindagi ka sab se khubsurat tareen din hota tha par ab.......ab youn lagta hai us ki taraf barhatay mare yeh qadam mann mann bhari ho gae hoon.. jaise main nangay paon kaantoo se guzar rae hoon
lakin mujhai khud ko mazboot kar us se milna he hai bas aakhri baar...........

Kia hoa Tabeer mujhai yahan q bulaya hai hum to kaheen bhee mil saktay thay.
Ayaan baychaine se us ki taraf barha

han woh mujhai laga jo baat mujhai tum se krni hai woh yahi ho sakte hai. mare awaaz ki larzish bohat saaf the

kia hoa hai tumhai tum theek to ho?Awaaz q kap kpa rahi hai kia kehna chahte ho tum?

Aur is lamhay mera dil chaha k main phoot phoot k roo du.....lakin apnay aansoo apnay dil pe giratay hoe bolna chaha to alfaaz mare halaq main he atak gae.

woh...woh main...Ayan main tumhari amanat wapis karnay aae hoon us ne angothi utaar kar ayan k samnay kar de.

Ayan nasamjhi ki kefyat main angothi ko aur kabhi tabeer ko dekhnay laga

kk..kia..kia matlab hai is baat ka pagal ho gae ho kia jaanti bhe ho kia kar rae ho?

main janti hu main..main tum se shadi nae kar sakte main yeh rishta khatam kar rae hoon.

Ohh...q ab tumhai mujh se muhabbat nahi rahi ya pher....ya pher koe aur pasand aa gaya hai?

aur mai intehai takleef k alam main bas Ayaan ko dekhti rahe jis ki Annkho main wohi shak ka zehar tha.

Tum..Ayaan tum ne kabhi mujh per mari mohabbat per kabhi etbaar nahi kia teen (3) saal main koe aisa lamha nahi aaya jub mujhai tumhai apnay har amal ki wazahat dani ho tumhai har baat ka etbaar dilwana ho
bas.. ab yeh hoa hai k main tumhai apni mohabbat ka etbaar dilwa dilwa kar thak chuki hoon..mujhai lagta hai main tumhai kabhi etbaar na dilwa sakoon ge..main is shak k zehar se marr jaon ge.

tum ..tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho Tabeer main..main sach main tum se mohabbat karta hoon to..to kia tum mujh se mohabbat nahi karti? kia tum mare bagair reh lo ge? tum ..tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho?

Ayaan main ne...main ne bohat chaha hai tumhai bohat muhabbat ki hai tum se aur isi mohabbat ki khatir main ne yeh faisla kia hai q k main nahi chahti tumharay shakk ka zehar qatra qatra ban kar mare rooh ko zehrela kar day
tumhara yeh shak mujhai tum se nafrat karnay per majboor kar day. main tum se nafrat nahi karna chahti .tum mujh per etbaar nahi kartay aur na kabhi kar sako gay main ..main is mohabbat ko marnay se bchana chahti hoon

bass aaj se humaray raastay juda hain please ab mujh se kabhi mat milna.

Aur mujhai laga ab agar main aik lamha bhee yahan ruki to main pher kabhii nahi ja sakoon ge ...Ayaan mujhai awazain day raha tha
Aik baaar shidatt se mera dil chaha ruk jaon aik baar .. sirf ..aik baar murr kar use dekhu..lakin main aisa nahi kar sakti q k agar main ne murr kar pechay dekha to main..to mai pathar ki ho jaon ge ...aur main pathar ki nahi hona chahti.............

[мιѕнααℓ]

BechArney sE zaara Pehle

Sami:Ja rahi ho?usne sawaal kiya..
ujala:haan !!..woh katiyat se boli
sami:ruko gi nahiin?..usne kisi aas se poocha
ujala:nahiin ! uska lehja pathar ho gaya
Sami: kyun?...usey buhut takleef hui..
Ujala:kyunke ab humare raste jUda jUda hai sami..woh buhut zabt se boli
sami:kia koi aisa rasta bhi nahiin bacha jo tum tak ata ho?uske lehje mein bekarari thi..
ujala:mein apne tak ane wala har rasta .. har ik rasta band kar ke ja rahi hon ..wapsi ke sare darwazey band kar diye hain..suno unhein kholne ki kabhi koshish mat karna..tum bhi lout jao..uska lehja uske ansoo mein bheeg gaya..

sami:lout jaon? kis bartey par?itna agey akar lout jaon..itni bari saza mat do ujala..kiya yehi mohabat hai??woh bikharne laga

ujala:haan yehi mohabbat hai paa leneke baad kho dene ka naam..naarsayi aur judayon ki aziyat ka naam..mein ab tumhein kuch nahiin de sakti sami..aur zarori tu nahiin ke har pyaar ki kahani mein milan se dochaar ho???bolo na sami?

sami:manta hun tumhari har baat lekin..Is dil ka kya karun ujala jis ki har lay tum se hai?tum chali jaogi tu mein kaise jiyo ga?kabhi socha tumne?mujh mein tumhein paa kar khone ka hosla nahiin ujala..mujh mein itna zirf itna hosla nahiin hai..usne apne baal muthiyon mein jakar liye aur ghutno per sar jhuka liya..

ujala:suno tum chahte ho na mohabbat jeet ban jaye mohabbat amar ho jaye?? tu phir aik kaam karo..mohabat ko dil ke niha khano mein chupado aur aik nayi zindagi ki shruaat karo..yeh jo tum karoge na yeh humari mohabbat ke liye hi tu hoga? humari mohabbat lazawaal ho jaye gi.......
yeh zArd pAtey..yeh pAir..hawAeein..FizAein..sab humein yaad rakhein gi sami..mohabbat zinda rahe gi..!!...Kya tum nahiin chahtey ke humari mohabbat amar ho jaye..jawadani ho jaye?? us ne narmi se uske shaney per hath rakha tha...

Uske sawaal per sami ne sar uthaya tha uski surkh hoti ankhein androni takaleef ka pata de rahi thein....

Sami:mein tumhein rokon ga nahiin ke mohabbat ka bharam mujhe azeez hai jis mohabbat ke wastey de rahi ho us mohbbat ke wasteY mein tumhein azaad karta hun..hAr Us wadey se jo tumne mujhse kiya..HAr us Qasam se jo meine khayi thein..bas ik mohabat ki khatir mein waada karta hun tumhareY rasteY mein ab kabhi nahiin aonga..magar suno.. kabhi kabhi dil ke kuaaR khol kar mazi ke sami ko ik jhalak dekh liya karna mujhe shayad kuch sukooN jaye...!! ..woh ik ik karke apne hi lafzon ke teer apne dil mein utaar raha tha...

Ujala:aik waada tumne kia hai aik akhri waada mein karti hun..KAy Mein tumhari bata rakhunGi..woh sami aik pyari yAAd ki Tarhaan mere Dil mein rahey Ga ..Ho Ske tu ujala ko maaf kar dena..!!...usey apne ansouon per yaara na raha woh bhagti hui wahan se nikalti chali gayi..

Zard patey hawa aur mitti ki bahon mein jhooltey hue uske jane ka ailaan kar rahe the..

aur w0h !

Us sarey Manzar Mein Akela reh Gaya..bilkul Tanha..Dil mein uth'tey Toofano ko seene mein dabaye uskei yadon ke diye ik ik karke bujhane laga ke us se wada jo kar betha tha.. ik nayi rah par jane ka..magar usey pata tha..abhi zakham gehre hain..unke bharne mein kuch waqt tu lagna hi tha..phir woh bhi wapas mur gaya...

[Saffroni]

lerka haath mian jharo liay khara haina ?

[akiller]

nice indication of broom ... lwal.....
if this is really a broom then above stories

above stories are just great... nice efforts with a lot of emotions and forlorn

and a question
is it necessary that story should have dialogues in it???

[O.o Ashi o.O]

Aaahhh !... kaha bhi tha thOra thOra likhna..
fir kahaniYan chaap di. . .