Writer Club Competition March 2011

[naz]

Yeh Tasveer Hai
Is PER APNE alfazon main choti si Tehrer likhye
bhottttt zaida lamba mat kijeye ga tehrer ko..




Rules :


1 ... Aik member aik he bar Share Karsakta hai.
2 ... Aik jaisa mat share kijeye ga.
3 ... Comp ki last Date 21 March hai.

[*resham*]

YAQEEN...

Meri uljhanon mai koi mere saath nahi mai akeli es safer main khood ko bhut bebas mehsoos ker rahi hun aaj mujhye zindagi ne kis mourd pr laker kharda keridya hai meri kuch smajh main nahi arha hai main kiya karo ....?

Kaisi ye tulkh mohbbat ki tulkh suchi dastaan hai kaisa ye sunsaan raasta hai k meri manzil ka mujhye bhi pata nahi main laash ban k apni hi qaber khood rahi thi aur mujhey kafan urhaney wala mera hi mahi tha meri mout ka sabeb wo nikla jise amin apni zindagi samjhti thi main ne tu kabi ye na na socha tha mera anjaam e mohbbat honga mai ne tu hamesha uske saath khwabon ka eak haseen ghr banya tha main etni diwangi se use chha rahi thi k mujhey khood andaza nahi tha k ye safer mujhye berbadi ki tarf le ja raha hai main kisi ki bi baat ka yaqeen nahi tha siwaye uske meri rooh main wo es tarh basa tha k meri her saans uski ebdat ker rahi thi etna toot ka main ne use chha tha k main khood ko bhool gayi thi her baar mera dil uski tarf khicha chala jata main kuch nahi samjhna hi nahi chhati hai dekh kr b nahi dekhti main chha kr b nahi soonti kiun k mera yaqeen hi etna mazboot hai main yehi smajhti k mai sab ko jhootla deti aur us se hamesha kehti k main aapke saath hun bhaley koi kuch b kahey mujhey yaqeen hai aap mujhey dhoka nahi dongey mujhey apnaogey sab k samney kitne pukht eradon main mai n khood ko qaid kr rakha tha aur mahi meri hr subha main hr shaam mai hota tha mere hr pal main hota etni wafa main ne uske naam krdi k main ne yaha tak soch liya k ger mere ghar waley na maney tu main zaher khalongi mar jaongi per uske bina nahi jiongi ya ghar se bhaag joaingi apne mahi k paas ....

kitni nadaan soch thi aap yehi kahongye na main kiya krti apni masoom aur suchi mohbbat main pagal hogayi thi piyaar ko hi meri dunya aur use meri zindaghi manney lagi her baar main jab b kisi baat ko leker rooth jati tu wo mujhey yaqeen dilata k mujh se bhut piyaar krta hai en ashjaaron k beech usi sunsaan raaston pr bulata aur apni baaton main uljha deta k tum hi meri mohbbat hun meri ezzat hun ger meri shadi tum se na howi tu mai kisi se shadi nahi karonga aur main uski baaton main ajati aur uske sikanjey main ayesi fansti k nikla na pati ....

Kitna mahir aur shatir tha wo jo mujhey mohbbat k naam per loot raha tha mujh se mohbbat k daawe kerta jo mere roothney pr khood ko zakhmi krta jo mai ne bolo tu marney ki baatein krta aur mere pichey meri mohbbat jhootlata pani zubaan se kehta k main uske pichye pari hun wo mujhye nahi chata main nadaan hun aaj fir se usne mujhey bada dawa krke usi andaaz mai apne paas bulaya usi jaga aur usne kaha meri zaat pr ye sirf eak elzaam hai resham main sabke samney kah sakta hun mujhey tum se mohbbat hai mera Yaqeen karo main es wiraan galion k sokhey paaton ki mananid kahi ye zalim hawa hamarey qadam na rook ley kahi ye shak k k gubaar se mera dam na nikal jaiye kahi ye pat jhar ka mosam tumhye hamesha k liye qaid na kerley tum thaam lo mera haath meri aur tumhari preshani k sirf do qadam ka fasla hai ye faaslein sirf do qadam hai shona ager main shai hun tu mujhye apne sine se laga lon k tumharey piyaar se mehek uthay humaray deda e dil jiski khushbu se hamari zindagi sawar jai dekhon mere haaton main ye sood kapra hai ager tum mujhye chord kr gayi tu main ese hi apna kafan bana longa mar jaounga main....

us waqat dard ki ashna main ajeeb se ehsaas ki pnaah main thi main aur uski baatein mujhey mere dard ki dawa lag rahi thi k pata nahi k kaha se qudarti himmat ka janam howa k ALLAH ne mujh main such ko samjhney ka ayesa qudrati housla de diya main main ne roti howi ankhon se larzti rooh se tarp kr uske haaton se apne haaton ko kheench liya aur aur kaha kis yaqeen ki baat ker rahye hun aap mera yaqeen toot chuka hai main ne tu tum se ek mukhtesir se sawaal ka jawaab manga tha un alfaaz ki tumne qader b nahi ki mere zahen ko tum zang laga ker tum chaley gaaye us waqat tum ne mujhye apna Rafeeq-e-Haal nahi samjha meri mohbbat ka dawa kerne waley mere lab pe eak sawaal ab b hai jiska jawaab tumharey paas nahi hai bolo de sakogey mere sawaal ka jawaab jab burey waqat mai main ne tumhein awaaz di tum ne use apni zaat per ek elzaam samjha zara aik dafa apne dil mein jhank kar dekho to tumhein apni munafiqat samjh main ajaigi k tum ne kis haqeqat se moo chupaya tha....

ye kah ker main use akeli tanha jis raastein k ourd mordi aur roti howi ankhon se mian us lambey sunsaan rastein ko dekh k sochney lagi kaisey guzrega es preshaan rastey per bebasi ka safer k kisi ko saath na paker kabhi main dar gayi tu jiska lamha lamha zawaal hai tabi mere dil se awaaz ayi lekin es jhooti mohbbat ka ik khookhla jazba mujhye kaisey kamzour ker sakta hai? fir main es jhootey yaqeen main khood ko soli per kiyn charhon kiun berbaad karo karo khood ko us k liye jis ne mujh se kabi mohbbat hi nahi ki jo khail raha tha mere ehsaas se use main ne round ker acha hi kiya khood juhlas janey se acha hai main ne use ehsaas tu dila diya uski galti ka main ne haqeeqat ki jang jeeti hai aaj wo mujhye dekhta raha aur awaaz de de ker mujhey apni tarf bulata rah gaya k wapas laout aaon na jaoun mujhye chourd kerper mujhye uski baatein aaj zaher lag rahi thi aur main hawa k jhookey ki tarh us raasetin ki aor bardi aur badi himmat se wo rasta main ne taaye ker hi liya......

[*Anaya*]

hahahaha............ya kia o raha ha ini ini lanmbi storiyan
10 dafa naz keh chuki ha naser honi chaye phr be

[*Anaya*]

Lout ao mat jao.............aik dfa to palto...............

[akiller]

Lout ao mat jao.............aik dfa to palto...............

ye to story ka title hogaya...

story kaha hai

[*Anaya*]

samaj ni ai to ya likh diya

[O.o Ashi o.O]

larka : aap jaa rahi hO... aap na jaO

larki :: chal hatt... mujhe jhaarOo maarnE dO

[akiller]

21 march 11:59 pm se pehle ye thread band nahi kijyega.. please..

[naz]

sorry jee
pore month thread lagi rehti hia
jis ne share karna hota hai wo tab b karsakta hai.
ab date per kaun share kare ga...


or Ashi tehrer likhni thi ...yeh tum ne kiya likha hai ?
comp k liye sahi nahi hia