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  1. 10-03-2011, 07:38 PM #1
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    cute Ghazal: Do ghari mayasser ho unka humsafer hone

    Do ghari mayasser ho unka humsafer hona
     Phir hamain gawara hai der bader hona.

     Ek azabe-pahem hai aise daure-bahshet,
     (bar-bar-abhishap) (khaufe daur)
    Zindgi ke chahre pe apna chasme ter hona.

     Ab to unke chahre pe bepanaha chehre hai,
     Kya ajeeb naymet thi verna bekhaber hona.

    Soch ke parindon ko ek panah dena hai,
    Dhoop ki hakumet main zahen ka shajer hona.

    Uske vasl ki saaet hum pe aaye to jana,
    Kis ghari ko kehte hain khwab main baser hona.
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  2. 11-03-2011, 06:21 AM #2
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    Default Re: Ghazal: Do ghari mayasser ho unka humsafer hon

    Ab to unke chahre pe bepanaha chehre hai,
    Kya ajeeb naymet thi verna bekhaber hona.
    zabardast... aise hi kalaam ki umeed hoti hay ap se.. keep sharing.
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    Default Re: Ghazal: Do ghari mayasser ho unka humsafer hon

    Uske vasl ki saaet hum pe aaye to jana,
    Kis ghari ko kehte hain khwab main baser hona.

    kya bat ha... zbardast ....
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  4. 12-03-2011, 09:53 PM #4
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    Default Re: Ghazal: Do ghari mayasser ho unka humsafer hon

    shukriya Killer and A Killer
    aapne tahedil se saraha ravazzo di
    aur daad se navaza. Bahut acha laga.
    So Nice. Bye.
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