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  1. 17-03-2011, 10:58 PM #1
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    cute Ghazal: Ki usi ke ho gaye hum jo na ho saka hamara




    Meri zindgi hai zalim tere gum se aashkara
    Tera gum hai der-haqiqat mujhe zindgi se pyara.

    Ye agar bura na mane to jahane - rango- bo main
    Main sakune - dil ki khatir dhoond loon sahara.

    mujhe aa gaya yakin-sa ki yahi hai meri manzil
    Sare raaha jab kisi ne mujhe dafatan* (* achanek) pukara.

    Main bataon ferk naseh, jo hai mujh main aur tujh main,
    Meri zindgi talatum* teri zindgi kinara.
    * flood main

    Koi E ' Shakeel' dekhe, yeh janun nahin to kya hai,
    Ki usi ke ho gaye hum jo na ho saka hamara.
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    Default Re: Ghazal: Ki usi ke ho gaye hum jo na ho saka ha

    meri zindigi talatum.. teri zindigi kinara..

    wah.. zbardast peeshkash..
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    Default Re: Ghazal: Ki usi ke ho gaye hum jo na ho saka ha

    bht khoob


    Ik Muhabbat ko amar karna tha.....

    to ye socha k ..... ab bichar jaye..!!!!
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  4. 19-03-2011, 11:29 PM #4
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    cute Re: Ghazal: Ki usi ke ho gaye hum jo na ho saka ha

    Quote Originally Posted by SanoriTa View Post
    bht khoob
    Shukriya SDanorita aapki
    tavazzo aur daad ke liye.
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