jo boo'o gay wohi kaato gay

[*Sila*]

[~*Heer*~]

achi threer hai ....

keep writting dear

[naz]

jaise karni waise bhurni..bilkul such..aisa he hota hia...leken kabhi dekhne main asia aya hai ke waldain itne ache hote hain or ulad najane ku bigar jati hia..tab bhi kiya waildain ka qasor hota hai ?

[*Sila*]

tehreer pasand karnay k liay shukriya Heer

aur Naz ap nay bilkul theek kaha k hamaysha aysa nhi hota...jaysay boht aam misaal hay yazeed ki woh bhi to ik aala ossaf k maaalik sahaabi ka byta tha.
aur sometimes parwarish mien waqai koi point nazarandaaz ho jaata hay..jaanay anjaanay mien.
aur insaan farishta to hay nhi k usnay kabhi koi galti ki hee na ho...ab nhi to kahin maazi mien aur phir ussay itna ehm na samjha ho k us par Allah say maafi maangay.
hamaaray maashray mien boht boht kuchh aysa hay boht say gunah jin k hum itny aadi ho chukay hien k hum un k baaray mien soochty hee nhi aur karty chalay jaaty hien......shayad issi wajah say maaashra itna bigar gya hay.

[dreamer]

hmm,,,boht acha likha,,dheemay andaaz main achi or pur asar batain ki hain,,,makaafat e amal aik haqeeqat hay,,aik mohtasibana khud kaar nizaam hay,,jo OOper walay nay nafiz ul amal kr rakha hay,,,is tahreer ka asar mazeed pur asar ho! khush rahain or likhti rahain sameera/sumaira saahiba!

[*Sila*]

thank you so much Dreamer for so beautiful comment.
new writers ko boht zyada hosla afzaai ki zaroorat hoti hay.
thnx again

[Bheegi-Palkain]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

aap nay mery dil ki baato ko apni tahreer ka hisa bana liya nehyat hi umda aap nay likha hay , likhti rahya

FeamnAllah

[*Sila*]

Assalam-o-Alikum WR WB

aap nay mery dil ki baato ko apni tahreer ka hisa bana liya nehyat hi umda aap nay likha hay , likhti rahya

FeamnAllah

wa alaikum salam

hmm ....meri to bas ik koshish thi ..sab ny pasand kiya to dil ko khushi hui...k mera qalam bhi kuchh achha likh sakta hy
saraahnay k liay boht shukriya

khush rahiay sada

[~*~Mehar~*~]

true

bilkul sahi kaha hai u nay

zbrdst sharing

[*Sila*]

true

bilkul sahi kaha hai u nay

zbrdst sharing

thank you so muchh Mehar
apko yahan daykh k khushi hui
khush rahiay sada